It is already that time folks – end of the semester. Although the material that was to be taught in a 14 week session was compacted into 5 weeks of intensive and rigorous learning, I did not once feel overwhelmed. Sure, doing homework in the middle of June is not my ideal way of spending a portion of my summer break, but Dr. Nichols always presented the material in a way that was understanding and engaging.
To round out the semester, we were asked to provide feedback on the blogs of our peers. You know, offer ways to improve their writing, what we liked/disliked, etc. I really enjoyed browsing around on their blogs and seeing what tactics they used in their writing that differed from mine. The first blog I chose to comment on was John’s. My comment stated:
What I loved most about your blog was the supplemental resources that you used. You really went above and beyond with conducting research about media criticism and how it can be analyzed. Furthermore, you gave direct connections for people to use, to explore the topics that you summarized.
Additionally, you laid it out quite nicely. You tied in a lot of references that would interest a wide audience, from broadcasting stations, to providing a current events application of the fight over media, and rounding it out with the family favorite – Disney.
If I had to offer some advice on how to improve further posts, I would touch upon the concepts we are learning in class. You did an awesome job of utilizing your own knowledge on the topic, but a lot of the material we learned in class would have fit in nicely, especially in your intro. Douglas Kellner and his article on media culture found at http://gseis.ucla.edu/faculty/kellner/papers/SAGEcs.htm provides excellent in depth observations regarding media criticism and consumption. A quote of his that I plugged into my post stated, “The media are a profound and often misperceived source of cultural pedagogy: They contribute to educating us how to behave and what to think, feel, believe, fear and desire — and what not to.” This idea would tie into your argument about Clearchannel and Brandchannel quite well.
Other than that I thought your writing was very intelligent and well constructed. You immediately lured me in with your introduction and held my attention for the length of the post.

After reading his, I knew I wanted to comment on a different blog topic for my next review. Therefore, I chose Ally’s, and responded with some feedback about the various films we watched on consumerism. My feedback included:
I love the use of the line “You can buy your children all the products in the world, but you can’t buy back their childhood!” It is 100% true and something I think you could have placed higher up in the post.
Giving readers definitions of terminology that you will be using is great, but I feel like you lost me a little. I am guilty of the same thing! I get so lost in informing my readers about every term and theory that it becomes monotonous. Throwing in some examples, in addition to the definitions, might have jazzed up the beginning a teeny bit more.
Great reference to patriarchy as far as the princesses go! It made me understand exactly what the term meant and laid it out in a way that was also easy to understand and follow.
You also gave really good references to how things were when we were younger. It is so true, the imaginations of children are slowly disappearing, and I cannot help but agree with you completely that without all the technological advancements we have today, they would be lost.
An outside source that I utilized so my readers could really understand the ideals that Disney teaches, was the scene where the Beast maliciously scolds Belle to come to dinner (it can be found at http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=gG5ec92GMvo&feature=related). With this clip embedded, readers can make the direct connection between your argument and the ideals mentioned in Mickey Mouse Monopoly.
For my last and final feedback response, I thought to myself, why not just review blog post #2? That way I am getting fresh insight on all three of the previous assignments. Therefore, I chose to view Danielle’s blog and reply with the following:
I really like how you pinpointed the connections between the viewers’ lives and the lives they are seeing on television (being betrayed by a best friend, etc.)
To offer some feedback, I would suggest introducing some of the concepts we learned in class earlier on, to give the readers an idea of exactly where you are going/why you are analyzing the show. Don’t get me wrong, the details and connections you provided were great, but I found myself wondering why you were highlighting these elements of the show.
You did an awesome job of picking up on the theories we learned in class in a way that was easily understandable for an outsider. You take specific elements about the show, that whether you are an avid watcher or you watch occasionally, the viewer would be able to recognize and agree with your arguments.
Additionally, you chose a really great program to apply the elements of genre criticism! However, some pictures and links to the show would have allowed your reader to use the visual to enforce the ideas being presented. I chose the show Friends and for my readers to better understand the topic I was discussing, I provided a link to the exact episode that I analyzed. Generally speaking, people do not always understand where you may be going in your argument and are more visually capable of learning. (for example I spoke about when Joey and Ross argued and the level of intelligence between the two characters was accentuated – http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=3ni26dVGt1E&feature=player_embedded)
Aside from that you laid things out in a very cohesive manner and held my attention for the length of the post!
As I previously mentioned, although being in class throughout the month of June was not my definition of a “fun” summer, I really enjoyed the topics/theories presented in this course. Each day I was taught a different way of viewing media and how it is impacting and transforming society’s ideals.
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The Pew Research Center released a study of how media consumption has changed since 2000. Whereas only 46% of adults used the Internet in 2000, 79% of adults are using it in 2010. Prior to taking Media Criticism, this is a statistic I would have looked at and brushed over, without giving it much thought at all. However, with the current knowledge I have about media consumption habits, how media shapes our culture, the culture of consumption that is evolving, I can develop a well-thought opinion and argument surrounding that statistic.
It has been a pleasure taking part in yet another one of Dr. Nichols’ fabulous classes. She has a way of teaching that I have yet to experience with any other professor at Towson University.





To better understand the show as a whole, I will be using a narrative criticism approach, particularly, Aristotelian.
Materialism is occasionally mentioned in the show and often times is associated with Rachel’s character. Rachel came from a wealthy family and prior to working for Bloomingdales, had little to no working experience. In the last few seasons, she was employed by Ralph Lauren and was consistently the fashion icon for the group. Her character was always dressed to the nine’s and purchasing the latest trends in fashion and even
The Pew Research Center released a 
Kellner goes deeper into theory by saying, “Those who uncritically follow the dictates of media culture tend to ‘mainstream’ themselves, conforming to the dominant fashion, values, and behavior.”